Community Songs Project Part 5

Ok guys,

First of all, as some of you may have noticed. My site got transfered to a new provider and some data was lost..part 3 + 4 are gone. But I still have your comments on it. So its not a complete failure.

I think we are at a point where the song is just about at the end. Its been really great working with you guys, getting your feedback and input. This song is written about you guys by you guys and for you guys…and girls. Its quite a feat, you should be proud that you worked on it with me. The song wouldn’t be any where near as good as it is now without your comments and emails. I’m really happy with how it has turned out, and I hope that you are as well.

We just have one last thing to tie up, and that is the title of the song!

Here are some suggestions you guys suggested:

• Who’s with me
• Free
• Untie
• Release
• Open Letter to the World
• From Birth
• This Earth
• And the world

Choose your favorite from above and comment below which one you like. You can also suggest your own title if you wish!  The one that gets the most votes will win.

Here are the lyrics again to inspire you:

to find love

find peace

find rhythm

from birth

that all we really

wanted do on this earth.

You sent me some rules

and I followed them through and

I went to schooland got my deploma

and did everything im meant to be doing

But ever since thenIve needed a change,

because things aint working outdoing it your way

and the world

better get out of my way

coz im making a change to the world

and Im doing it in my own way.

Who is with me?!

Looking at others

Im on the outside,

their working their pod jobs

doing their 9-5

and thats not who

Ive been made to be,

God gave me this life

you cant take it from me

and the world

better get out of my way

coz im making a change to the world

and Im doing it in my own way.

Who is with me?!

A special thanks to Marjon for getting me to change the lyrics in part of the song. The song is much more powerful now. The edit is in red Italics. What do you think?

All right, lets finish this off shall we! I’m thinking about doing a special online show for you guys so you can hear the completed song and hang out, chat and listen to some of my other songs. I will let you guys know about that soon!